It remained untouched as of yet. The bed she was on, the only thing in sight, was in the center of the room. Her rational mind fought against this. Like, no matter what she saw or did, eventually it would stop. She would crash down towards something that would end her life. Part of learning to write great dialogue is hearing it. When in doubt, leave it out!
Briella. Age: 25.
Two beer bottles are clutched in my hands, with condensation trickling down into the grooves of my palms.
Joyce. Age: 27.
Writing Dialogue - What to Leave Out. Amongst an amazing cast, these two absolutely nail the mother and son dynamic. His legs move first, and as he stirs, she begins to play with more intent, the volume rising.